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Thog’s Masterclass Missing Link Dept. ‘He was wearing a grey cap, grey jacket, white shirt, navy-blue striped tie and white socks, which he’d pulled up almost to his pink kneecaps.’ (Claire North, The First Fifteen Lives of Harry August, 2014) … Continue reading
I don’t need an editor…
By Robin Winter Why do I need an editor? I can read– in fact I’m really good at that. I can get all those great advice books that tell me how to self-edit, and then I’m there, right? No. The answer … Continue reading
Foreword Review of Watch the Shadows by Robin Winter
Watch the Shadows Robin Winter White Whisker Books 978-0-9863265-0-9 (May 1, 2015) Impressionistic writing invites the imagination into this sci-fi mystery with idiosyncratic characters. The sight of a plastic grocery bag drifting on the wind is common all over, but … Continue reading
How To Read Like A Writer
You’ll need a book you want to read, a highlighter pen, and some stick on arrows like you see on legal documents that say: sign here. Here’s what you mark up in the book: l. Words, phrases, sentences you admire. … Continue reading
More From the Bureau of published bad writing
Thog’s Masterclass Please add your own in the comments below. Neat Tricks ‘Alex’s snub-nosed face sagged open. His blue eyes revolved incredulously.’ (Paul Anderson & Gordon R. Dickson, ‘Heroes are Made’ aka ‘The Sheriff of Canyon Gulch’, May 1951 Other … Continue reading
Writers of Kern Spring Conference Saturday, April 25
10:35 – 11:35 AM Toni will speak on “Mastering Editing Skills” Techniques that help the writer learn the all important skill of self-editing: Avoid The 10 Most Common Mistakes First Novelists Make. Insights you’ve not heard before from an agent. … Continue reading
Bureau of published bad writing
Thog’s Masterclass Dept of Punchy Opening Lines. ‘At first there was only the cold, the Stygian inky iciness that held every muscle of his body in thrall and made his thoughts flow with the turgid slowness of treacly molasses.’ (Wilbur … Continue reading
Elizabeth Gilbert on Writing
“When I was in the middle of writing Eat Pray Love and I fell into one of those pits of despair that we will fall into when we’re working on something that’s not coming and we think ‘this is going to be … Continue reading
Why We Write Memoirs
Writing our own stories helps us see the narrative thread in our lives, reflect on the consequences of events and maybe find redemption or closure. Life stories, memoirs, autobiographies — whatever term we use–have been wildly popular for the past … Continue reading
















